The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
it is true that the gap between the rich and the poor people is becoming larger. several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from the government and individuals.
As poor people are more poverty and rich people are more wealthy, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that the increasing poverty of poor people could cause the decreasing of the economic development of the country. Because nobody has enough money to buy the products from factories and stores, businesses must either reduce the price of items or run out of business, leading to the increasing number of unemployed people in the future. Another problem is the rampant crime rate. Without the means to obtain money through work, the poor could turn to crimes such as robbery, burglary, drug trafficking, assault.., which makes the degradation of the society.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution should be done by the government, they ought to provide more jobs training for unemployment. Therefore, the number of poor people, whose main part are in lacking jobs or low-paid work status, would go down. The second measure would be the provision of better education at school and in society, especially in the slum areas and poor regions. this can be helped by numerous teachers and people in the community, it is necessary for young people to be aware about how serious it would be if they are offenders. Moreover, grants and scholarships should be donated to improve the education of poor people in order to give them chances to enter good schools, so that they can get good jobs with well paid in the future.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of the wide difference between people who are wealthy and poverty. I believe appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.
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- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 78
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67315424432 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9699897657 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286711759191 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103145540683 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100404273383 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181879723358 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919359760198 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.