A gift that is meaningful to me
I am of opinion that gifts are always special because it shows someone's love for me. I have received many beautiful gifts on different occasions from many individuals. But, one of the most precious and practical gifts I have ever received has been a laptop from my father.
My father would have promised to present me a unique gift if I had passed the high school exam. And more than expected, I got high marks in the exam and was arranged in the special class of the school. My family was very happy about it. My father gave me a gift box and I instantly opened it. To my utter surprise, I got such a gift that is the finest blessing so far for me. My dad presented a Dell laptop which was very exceptional. It was the most thoughtful gift in my view as my father had put a lot of effort into it. I was extremely excited and hugged my dad while thanking him profusely.
As per my thought, it is so difficult to describe the laptop in words, but I would just tell you something about it. It was an i5 and it had white. The laptop had a lot of modern and rare features such as two cameras, increased memory, and more speakers. I do not know the price of the laptop but it has been priceless for me. I am not personally an IT professional, so I cannot explain this electronic device accurately, but I want to say that it is very simple but also useful.
I have never received such a valuable gift before. This present is an electronic device which has made my life better. It is very beneficial. It has helped me with both education and entertainment. I can use it to do many important studies such as searching for information, studying online, and so on. I also talk and chat with my relatives or my friends by using websites or applications without fees. I can say that my life would have been boring and slow if I had not had this beautiful gift. Even though it has been six years, that laptop is like a companion for me for a long time and then. And I want to express my thanks to my dear father for giving me a meaningful gift and I promise to study well so as not to disappoint my parents.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-09-15 | trangiahan | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...n priceless for me. I am not personally an IT professional, so I cannot explain this ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t it is very simple but also useful. I have never received such a valuable gif...
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Line 7, column 406, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...websites or applications without fees. I can say that my life would have been bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 24.0651302605 295% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23076923077 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52741192138 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478908188586 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7121049443 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.12 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.67935871743 242% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253023934313 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779200359156 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887221454105 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161224541275 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724531658381 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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