Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
some people claims global warming is one of the biggest threasts in thé 21st Century and sea levels are rising ar alarming rates.
Firstly, global warming has a negative effect in 2022, because a lot of activites by human for developing country that is make more pollution like air polluted, water polluted, vvv… that things have a create lots of carbon emission which is caused in global warming and influence in human health. For example, some people said that they can not breath smoothly after all day in the road or working in industry where have a lot of smoke and dust. Secondly, not only creates much of danger for quality life , but also make climate change which is caused of sea levels that it is very endanger for people life. it has negative effect on planet and danger for lots of animals like fishs , dolphins,…. Ice break is caused of sea levels. so most of lands in the world is disappear by covering water, following by the percentage of the needs of home or resistance will be decrease.
so what it the best solutions for these problems? that it a big question have no answered yet. some study found that people should reduce acitivites in developing country , which will improve some of the pollution.Although , most of development countries are caused make global warming which has influenced in human life and particularly health. some other research show that using clean energy like solar energy , wind energy will reduce these problems. individuals can use public transport instead of burning waste.
To conclude, we are facing a big threat of global warming which is caused in sea levels and climate change but they are many ways to reduce this issue. And it can be only done when every individual and the government take part in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81518151815 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50925719045 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0063772762 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226365372758 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734841600726 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984733520053 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173011091425 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105969692809 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.