Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A number of people advocate the sentiment that positive impact of globalization can justify for ignoring its tradeoff. From my own perspectives, notwithstanding wonderfully acknowledged privileges, we ought to take drawbacks into consideration for the purpose of reconciling between domestic and international elements.
To start with, it is sufficiently apparent that the industry that has been benefited the most from this trend is economy. That government give the permission to foreign co-operations to operate within nation’s border can irrefutably significantly improve economic given upsurging in GDP or consuming capacity. Moreover, allowing integrating procedure is mutually beneficial for companies and costumers as retailers can maximize sales figure meanwhile consumers can experience peculiar products of various nations.
However, massive-scaled invasion of multi-national groups can culminate in bankruptcy of national counterpart in light of the fact of gigantic discrepancy between source of capital. This can result in hesitance of potential start-ups and therefore a huge loss in GNP. Furthermore, indiscriminate globalization can lead to vicious homogeneity. Obviously enough, such film and entertainment industry can sweepingly propagate countries’ culture, which offspring generation would likely to emulate substituting for long-standing national tradition. Consequently, this movement follows by numerous conventional culture pushed to the brink of extinction. For instance, in Vietnam, we boast generating a plethora of melodies, excruciatingly, since the introduction of worldwide genes as pop, rap, there is only a tiny portion of the youth willing to perpetuate these beautiful arts.
In conclusion, despite conspicuous economic advantages, we can’t belittle its drawbacks to society. Therefore, it stands to reason that it is exceedingly crucial for government and each individual to rigorously manage and balance between domestic and international factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52117561135 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6305799029 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887471470297 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340981284334 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540461745536 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624232629192 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497568982124 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.32 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.14 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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