In a digital age, all businesses are dominated by advertisements to increase our awareness of a product or a service. While there are lots of creative and informative advertisements which provide many benefits to all of us, there are some ads which are made with wrong strategies as well. Therefore, they become extremely irritating day by day.
To begin with, many advertisements are not adhering to the proper rules of conduct for the industry, and also lacking moral principles. There are cases that some agencies or businesses, blatantly break the law by advertising faulty information which refers to misleading. For instance, as a victim, I saw an advertisement about laser center last year. I was promised for a permanent hair reduction after 6 sessions, unfortunately, it did not realize. These kinds of promotions are based on deception by use of trickery.
In addition, something that also crosses the line is the promotion of a behavior that that is immoral and unethical. Those kinds of ads encourage infidelity, violence, sexism, racism and so on. For example, on 8th of March, Women's day, a famous bookshop called ' Ali and Nino ' published an advertising with a photo of a half-dressed woman with glasses who was holding books in her hand in a class. Obviously, it led to massive complaints about it, so they had to delete and apologize for their sexist advertisement.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree that despite the fact that there are many useful advertisements that we can take advantage of, there are also some of them which contain immoral, unethical and inappropriate messages.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 89
- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extend do you agree or disagree wi 96
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.To what extent do you agree with this view? 78
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11406844106 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12524862028 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1175828066 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14314166832 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431580342716 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426702189935 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909921727355 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362357154108 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.