The government's Investment in artis, Musi and theatre ia a waste of money. Governments should invest these find in public services instead.
To What extent to di you agree with this statement.
In the relating-entertainment Investment of environment it Will make money useless , so authority has to invest their budget in public services. i entirely agree with this view because spend finansial to education scholarship and scheme for small business Will accelerate growth region.
Perhaps, one major reason to Investment in education scholarship that will give advantages at human resources in their Region because person-making learning to be better in life aspect. Therefore, it Will give each one who has been educated by them great opportunity and also decreses the low level of educational attainment. In addiction, who has been finished study they can help government to solve each problem based on their expertices and experiences, moreover , this thing which mostly use to being applyed in advance country to make survive their nation if anytime Will happen something which is difficult to predicts
Another reason why i support to Invest fund in low-key business because it will give snow ball effect for small-store-running society. Fistly, it Will reduce number of uniployment in region, so that it gives impact for well-being society. Futhermore, the more interpreneurs and buyers, the more finansial rounds , therefore it will give economic influence directly each Region which happen a lot of trading which is done by small business. Moreover, Income each trader who Will encorage one of Gross Domestic Bruto its country and this is one of way to be andvance country.
To sum up, i totally agree that to invest finacial in public services because funding educational and low-key business is one of way which authority grow day by day. It seem that government has to try investment their finance in some sector to support their income of region.
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also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28368794326 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01408614625 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6650419522 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123762027507 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590123068103 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536995935165 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101253323685 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624644569494 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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