Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The history is sometimes a great momentum for reference to learn from the future although sometimes some see this as not something useful. In my view, history is the key to the future that must be entrusted to each generation's relay.
Therefore, many people see history as the key to success for every way of life of many people, countries, groups or companies. First, this is because history is a path that has been carved out by anyone. whether he succeeded or failed, so that it becomes an evaluation for his successors to learn from the past or imitate what has succeeded from the past. for example, what I have been through I learn English from those who always failed and then succeeded after going through many years but the lesson I can learn from them is the formula for a faster way of learning and dont be discouraged in the learning process. This is one of the things I learned from their past until they were successful in learning English.
On the other hand, there is history that is not something of quality. This is usually someone who experiences disappointment in life to the point of hating history or the past that does not need to be seen as a value. For example, there is a husband and wife whose wife is always cheating on him so many times that he feels traumatized and divorces his partner. This is an assumption of the past or history, let it pass, there is no need to look back to be a lesson because of the disappointment it causes. Although, I think we can still learn from the affair so it doesnt happen again.
In conclusion, I think the future and the past are like magnets that are the key to success even though the history is not qualified.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh I learn English from those who always failed and then succeeded after going th...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ormula for a faster way of learning and dont be discouraged in the learning process....
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the disappointment it causes. Although, I think we can still learn from the affa...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e can still learn from the affair so it doesnt happen again. In conclusion, I think...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51791530945 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51514315753 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488599348534 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.882634699 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210623030219 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789398533367 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390724040075 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11783672316 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507631933836 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh I learn English from those who always failed and then succeeded after going th...
^^
Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ormula for a faster way of learning and dont be discouraged in the learning process....
^^^^
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the disappointment it causes. Although, I think we can still learn from the affa...
^^
Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e can still learn from the affair so it doesnt happen again. In conclusion, I think...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51791530945 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51514315753 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488599348534 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.882634699 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210623030219 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789398533367 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390724040075 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11783672316 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507631933836 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.