The government should provide the poor and the homeless with houses. Do you agree or disagree
Almost in all country there are people that can not afford home. And some people believe that government has to provide house for homeless, other may argue that they should work harder or survive by themselves. In this essay I will analyze both of the opinion, and why I agree that government has to support such kind of people.
First of all, It will increase the level of the city. If the government commence to maintain poor people, it will promote local town to be more modern and generous. Other countries begin to respect, and perhaps offer to collaborate with them. In addition, when the urban area is disciplined and without homeless people usually encourages tourists or foreign guests to visit the town. For example: I remember when my cousin have business trip in USA, that is famous with a lot of roofless, he was shocked and came back with home without enthusiasm.
Secondly, it promotes the rise of economy considerably. People need convenience to open or develop their talent. So when the controllers of the city provide support, homeless locals will start to create new project or novel that could grow the economy. More well-of people more money to the government.
On the other hand, some may argue that there is no necessary to give them home. People are commonplace, and when they get free thing, their feedback to the world will alter and they will be lazy to develop. In addition, young generations will be motivated, they could see that our world need people who work hard.
To sum up, I strongly believe that providing house for homeless is much more efficient and better than do not help them and led to survive by themselves. This is because this kind of change in the society improve the economy and level of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7606557377 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44453880197 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8037181672 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4117647059 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157263087481 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421039271459 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521100174105 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861654507192 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579138255623 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.