Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Certainly, it is true that railways and roads both are the safest and affordable means of transportation. From my point of view, I agree that government can expenditure on railways, but they also need to spend on roads to some extent.
To begin with, railways are the main mode of transport that are mostly used by the industries. They transport the raw materials from one place and finished goods to the other. They also uses the roads, but they mostly rely on railways due to heavy and bulk of commodities can be transported. Railways are accessible to the all age groups from children to elders. This mode is usually used for long route journeys like, from Delhi to Mumbai or from Mumbai to Amritsar. There are luxurious trains like The Royal Express which give full comfort like a 5 star hotel. However, there are not railways facility given to the residents of remote areas and railway lines cannot be laid on mountains. These are the regions where roads comes in.
In addition to this, the roads are the one which are used by all sections of society. Roads have been laid in those areas where train lines cannot be laid. Roads can be used for the transportation and traveling. Similarly, this is used by the people who work in the local areas and need their private vehicle to go to the job. Government is already repairing the existing roads and making the new roads for the convenience of the public. Moreover, in the remote and mountain areas, there are roads for transportation of the people and goods.
To wrap up, it can be said that government requires to spend equally on roads as well as on railways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
... finished goods to the other. They also uses the roads, but they mostly rely on rail...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...it can be said that government requires to spend equally on roads as well as on railways...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, similarly, so, well, in addition, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66202090592 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52486090793 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2982765153 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7058823529 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998774274806 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340793375025 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424489276347 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774451243695 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449377874792 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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