Some people argue that depending more on technology to overcome the problems will surely demolish thinking capacity of the individual.I completely agree with the statement because they get help from the internet easily even fort the miniature task and the sense of hard work from the mind of individuals will get demolished.
If technology is vast in the area then the people depend on the device for their easy. Many students in the school and college depends on internet for their home assignments which will surely affect them in their college life .Nowadays, Students don't rely on books and the teacher's advice for their exam preparation.People now need device to complete one small task.For instance,The article published in "The Kantipur" in 2017,It was found that 8 out of 10 students appearing final exam of grade 8 were using calculator for simple calculations .So it can easily verify the deterioration of the thinking capacity of the young students.
The destruction of the thinking of hard work and determination from the individual's brain can be seen.In past people use to travel more than ten kilometers in a single day but the people nowadays they need a vehicle to travel just a 100 meters away. A child who rely on technology will surely lack the social characters on him/her.for example, one of my uncle's son use his mobile phone to do his every task either it is difficult or easy .Sense of hardwork is erased from his hard work in his small age. thus , this prove the loss of hardworking sense is seen in the peoples.
To sum up,the capacity of mind should be used to tackle the small problems and technology play vital role on solving the huge tasks which will ease the people in their work without comprising the ability to use their own logic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87171052632 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7351494896 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.426280306 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 211.571428571 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.4285714286 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19699333409 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867197135233 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464260189661 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121018286286 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270917849092 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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