Nowadays, the development of the railway system has reached a new level, while the development of the road system has never stopped as well. Although some people believe that government ought to allocate more of their budget to rail than roadways, I totally agree that railways will be better for society.
To begin with, for travel, people care about security most. Actually, traffic accidents occurred on trains are much less than which on private cars according to research. This is easy to understand, when driving cars, we must be fully concentrated and focus on the road, in that case we will get tired easily, without timely rest, accidents are easy to happen. However, when taking the train, we don’t need to care about the driving issues because this daunting task was handed over to professionals, what’s more, we would feel relaxed due to higher speed and better efficiency.
Another reason for I stand on the railway side is that it is more environmental friendly. Unlike previous coal trains, most high-speed railways today use electricity as an energy source, including subways in cities. Yet modern cars still use fossil fuel, which produce a lot of pollution. In spite of hybrid or electric vehicle has already came into being, the problem of low reliability and short battery life needs to be handled.
Admittedly, we can not ignore the advantage of road transportation. Travel with private cars means convenient, freedom and fun to drive, in addition, self-driving traveling depends on the complete freeway. But, we should find the question through our further eyes, when the railway system is fully built, for short travel we may use light rail, for long-distance travel we can use high-speed rail. Traffic accidents are reduced and pollution is prevented, this is the future we want to see.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... hybrid or electric vehicle has already came into being, the problem of low reliabil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, in addition, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12040133779 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68905472481 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645484949833 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2556844332 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998587844866 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328021425499 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274976708011 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614679404751 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263151042468 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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