Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to the development of technology, people nowadays can get to the news by many ways like traditional on newspaper and television, or online news on computer, smartphone, etc. The quantity of news people can reach is vast and some people claim that it has no connection to our lives so reading news is wasting our time. However, others reject that statement. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with the think that news is not necessary for us to read.
Firstly, news brings us the enormous amount of knowledge in many perspectives. For inventor or researcher, online magazine and newspaper shows the new science reports, inventions and demand of the society will support people in their job by adding new information of newest research of developments of specific specialization. For instance, scientist over the world can know what have been researched and apply that study to their own paper in order to better their scientific explorations. Moreover, not just in science, technology engineer and economics also be benefited from that news. They can know what is the trend of people around the world and lead their strategy parallel to that trend to minimize the risks that they could have when they starting new projects or investments.
Secondly, people can achieve more social observation. Watching daily news brings us the strong viewpoint about every day problem that occurs every second on the world. People always update new in politics, health and entertainment which is affect individuals lives every day. In this case, community will necessarily benefit from such kinds of people. For example, people can bring to date the information about regulars to comply so as to not to be fined or guidance about travel, buying guide and health cares will give us the best choices for our lives.
On the other hand, the news also cause negative effect to us. Bad news, fake news are is not upgrading our intelligence and it will damaged our thinking. For example, fake news like anti-vaccine cause many deaths to children because some diseases that could be treated by vaccinated immune system. Moreover, in Covid-19 period, news that it is just a common flu is definitely wrong and make people do not care about that.
In conclusion, shaping good personal habit of reading news will bring massive societal advantages. Although there are some disadvantages that news cause to our lives, numerous benefits of reading or watching news involving knowledge gaining and social merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...point of view, I strongly disagree with the think that news is not necessary for us to re...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the newest'.
Suggestion: of the newest
... in their job by adding new information of newest research of developments of specific sp...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...he information about regulars to comply so as to not to be fined or guidance about trave...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'damage'
Suggestion: damage
... upgrading our intelligence and it will damaged our thinking. For example, fake news li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0802919708 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69246010335 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7284608006 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336567157944 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987308893511 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916085224869 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199700897275 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111578578047 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.