Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Criminals have been existed for thousands of years and people have punished it for better life. Death penalty is one of those punishments that have been there since the ancient. However, some people claim that death penalty is a violent discipline that people should avoid it. Others show their agreement with keeping death penalty for some reasons. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the statement that death punishment should be applied to some serious crimes.
Death penalty can be unacceptable for modern society. Firstly, death penalty can also be considered as killing people and we have no rights to do that matter. In the past, there are several ways to penalize a person such as hanged, throwing rocks, etc. Nowadays, people use poison to punish crimes and people disagree with this action due to it cost too much money for one poison dozen and each person has their rights to live like every normal people so authorities cannot break that rights. Secondly, in some hard cases, investigation process can point out wrong culprit. Death penalty can kill innocence people if authorities judge the case too fast that it is not investigated clearly. Last but not least, every people have the moment that they cannot control their actions that lead to crimes. So that each person should have a second chance to refresh their life and improve their humanity.
On the other hand, people who committed violent crimes need to be punished with death penalty for many reasons. One of that is it will be a thing that dare people who tend to do a crimes such as murder. It will stop the major crimes to happen in society in order to keep our place saving to live in. Moreover, death punishment will bring the equivalent to the victims and society due to what the crime has done to the guiltless people. Another reason is governments have paid millions of dollars to make prisons in operation. For instance, the US spend nearly 100 million a year to keep prison working and that money can invest in citizens' health or education.
In conclusion, although capital punishment has some negative perspective, it still need to be existed in society to controlling criminals, avoid people from society's vibes and make the living place become peaceful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a crime' or simply 'crimes'?
Suggestion: a crime; crimes
...a thing that dare people who tend to do a crimes such as murder. It will stop the major ...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'needs'?
Suggestion: needs
...has some negative perspective, it still need to be existed in society to controlling...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86979166667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3953294307 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0883975102 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362548930921 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121735752794 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103072593014 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224357610827 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080108929857 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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