Some of people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and refraining to do something new are preferred by several people. Others, nevertheless, think that one of the splendid things in life is to alter our previous habit. In accordance with this issue, I am going to present my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
I do appreciate of some people arguments which preferred to keep doing the similar routines and refraining new experiences. In regard to my point of view, there are two reasons of this argument. First and foremost, those individuals feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do new things. Second but not less crucial, all of them, moreover, are too enjoying of their current activity which is, in the end, making them to prefer staying at their position and do not want to try something new.
Nonetheless, I personally agree to the other people who would rather do new experiences instead of practicing the same routines. In accordance with this, I do believe that these individuals also have their own reasons. They, firstly, have an enormous curiosity about new things. Secondly, these masses are too fascinated to go and feel new experiences and conditions. Lastly, they, those individuals, basically desire to go out of their comfort zone because they are going to find countless precious things and they used to learn something after they have done it. Therefore, they would rather to do numerous new things instead of doing the same activities.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for individuals because it is capable of rendering more benefits and bestowing fewer drawbacks. Thus, I would rather to favour of the statements of people who desire to go out of their comfort zone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97658862876 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82238581335 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0933353493 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194988565909 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695167711281 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636387215854 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117022236062 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488879689055 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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