the growth of onilne shopping will one day lead to close all shops in towns
do you agree or disagree?
the growth of onilne shopping will one day lead to close all shops in towns
do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that shopping centers will face many financial problems because nowadays most people prefer to shop online. I agree with this idea and will support this statement in upcoming paragraphs.
First of all, it is clear that online shops make shopping easier, and people don't need to go out and get stuck in traffic. They can stay at home, sit in a chair, scroll the media calmly, and buy everything they want without wasting time. So because of it, people prefer online shops, and it causes economic problems for shop centers, so they may close their businesses.
secoundly It is hard for old people and those who have children to walk through shop center and find what they want, so online shops are a good choice for them. Some people are very fastidious, so online shops and many available websites make shopping easier for them, and they can see a variety of products and buy them easily.
To sum up, I think online shops can be a seriou Threat for shop centers, and I think they must make accounts for their businesses, rescue their businesses, and sell their products and attract customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72429906542 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25282598318 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3773310971 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369292226576 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197495110208 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.287344050366 0.0667982634062 430% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277979963373 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245849765865 0.056905535591 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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