Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Recently, the phenomenon of happiness and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas definition of happiness is a complicated, unsolved problem, enormous elements lead to make people happier. In my mind, such factors as economical elements as well as the ability to understand others’ emotions pave the way to grab happiness.
Obviously, unlike arithmetic issues, human-related concepts, like aesthetic and happiness are far from easy to define precisely. It is more likely that there is a distinctive definition to do with happiness per each individual’s view i.e., people interpret happiness differently in their own manner. Some experts claim that happiness makes what we are. Hence, the distinguish between being human and animals is the ability to become happy or sad. Although happiness is mistaken by its causes regarding loads of ordinary people.
Undoubtedly, various people around the four corners of the globe are seeking happiness inside themselves. Such elements as achieving their own personal targets or being capable of helping other humans lead to feel happy. According to psychologists’ studies, if a person could purchase food or stuff for others, he or she feels far happier in comparison with doing shop for himself or herself. Furthermore, having an excellent family or the opportunity to become a parent should be taken into consideration as other reasons.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of economical elements. A remarkable number of individuals think of money as major, even the only, factor ends up to experience happiness. The lack of money brings with itself poverty. Consequently, poor people couldn’t feel the true happiness. They are of the opinion that earning more income, under ant circumstances, is a significant way to achieve happiness.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on happiness definition as well as its causes, I am inclined to believe that humans should find happiness in their heart and mind as well. Who knows such individuals as Bill Gates as one of the wealthiest humans of the entire globe, feels happy or not?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.353115727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04454798364 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626112759644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8741171971 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194136875972 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582415697742 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458444858595 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105483296787 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655435241643 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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