Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is irrefutable that happiness plays an indispensable role in our lives. However, people find it more challenging to identify it. In this essay, I will present some reasons to identify happiness as well as some crucial elements to get happiness.
Unquestionably, happiness is an abstract definition. First of all, feeling of happiness is based on their personal position in society. According to a prestige survey on a well-known website, it is proven that for people who have high-income, happiness is attributed by their satisfaction and their sense of pride. On the contrary, many underprivileged families, they are likely to be happy when they do need to worry about financial burden and have a state of well-being in their health and education. A low-income family was interviewed by kenh14.vn about the definition of happiness, the bread-winner of this family told the peaceful home is their happiness. Secondly, happiness is also different from ages. When people were children, they have experience in happiness with a variety of toys, but when people become adults, they are likely to have a peaceful life.
Although it seems not easy to get a right definition for happiness, people are able to apply some basic precondition to achieve it. Firstly, for everyone, it is so hard to have a happy life if they have a life of deprivation. In other words, their basic survival needs such as accommodation and food should be provided fully. Another factor is that in terms of spirit, people find happiness when they have an inner peace. A person is unable to climb to the happiness if he or she commits murders or hurts others.
In conclusion, happiness is so tough to define because it is particular in each individual but people can achieve their happiness for the aforementioned factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'identifying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: identifying
...owever, people find it more challenging to identify it. In this essay, I will present some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05704697987 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0206058543 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2047349698 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201039041564 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779673526166 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539861947249 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143970372148 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407298025351 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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