Earlier technological development brought more changes to the life of ordinary people than recent technological development do? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that initial advancements in technology are more beneficial than the ones in this day and age and they bring more developments for people's lives. From my point of view, both former technological progresses and the current technological evolution are equally advantaged.
On the one hand, it is no denying the fact that earlier technological innovations play an indisputable role for the revolution of people’s lives. Firstly, these technologies lead an uncomplicated life. For instance, innovations using steam-engine such as water-frame is one of the greatest inventions of industrialization of weaving during the early Industrial Revolution. It supports workers to boost their work-efficiency and reduce the amount of human labor needed. Another invention is that computer bringing a wide range of merits for people. Since the first model had been invented, computers are considered as necessary tools for sending, saving and transmitting data for different purposes, which lay a foundation for the invention of the Internet. Without computers, the Internet might not have even been invented.
On the other hand, current technological revolutions have brought about numerous advantages for mankind. To illustrate, portable laptops are renovated from cumbersome computers or smart phones with top-notch functions are evolved by "dumb" phones. In the field of medicine, some inventions help to change people's destinies. For instance, in the past, cancer was an incurable disease but currently, by virtue of medical breakthroughs, “Stem cell technology” is invented to reduce metastases of cancer cell. In hi-technology field, the emergence of the Internet also has benefited for people. Thanks to this advanced technology, everyone can access to useful sources of aspects of life with an Internet connection and keep in touch with their friends through online-based communication tools without geographical barriers, eliminate the need for old-fashioned and time-consuming tools, such as letters.
In conclusion, from my point of view, earlier technological development and recent development has the same level of benefit for humans for the aforementioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85538461538 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41580039049 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627692307692 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1150089683 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181841858641 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667121896663 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070710822689 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147967838874 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741417809629 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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