Have YOU ever been in a relationship in college? Is college the right time to fall in love?. Some believe that love can be a prime motivator to help them try harder in study and work. However, it can be clearly seen that loving while studying can waste time and worsen academic performance.
First, having a romantic relationship is a waste of time for career development. Spending too much time on love will distract students from studying.For instance, when a couple loves each other, they have to spend a lot of time with their lover such as hanging out, eating out, and going shopping. Therefore, the time they devote to study can decrease rapidly and it can make them less interested in studying.
Furthermore, loving while studying may be a major cause of poor academic performance. It is generally agreed that when there is a quarrel or break up with a lover, they will not be able to concentrate on their studies. Many students, when psychologically affected by love affairs, often skip classes at school or even leave school. Hence, they often have poor academic results and are not able to get a diploma, which can directly affect their future career.
Conversely, from a different perspective, some people believe that can positively affect their mental health and studying. It is true that love can invigorate people and encourage them to study hard. According to the share of many university students, they said that it was their lover who helped them have a better orientation for their future life, thereby motivating them to try harder for study and work. However, it is a major rate of undergraduates having a suitable lover.
In conclusion, having a romantic relationship at university can waste students' time and pose a threat to their future careers. Therefore, those who are in a relationship should use love in a good way and can manage their time properly. They also have to concentrate on their studies, which could even turn to their advantage. It is predicted that the percentage of students falling in love while in school will decrease in the fast pace of modern life, where work and finance are the most important factors.
Have YOU ever been in a relationship in college? Is college the right time to fall in love?. Some believe that love can be a prime motivator to help them try harder in study and work. However, it can be clearly seen that loving while studying can waste time and worsen academic performance.
First, having a romantic relationship is a waste of time for career development. Spending too much time on love will distract students from studying.For instance, when a couple loves each other, they have to spend a lot of time with their lover such as hanging out, eating out, and going shopping. Therefore, the time they devote to study can decrease rapidly and it can make them less interested in studying.
Furthermore, loving while studying may be a major cause of poor academic performance. It is generally agreed that when there is a quarrel or break up with a lover, they will not be able to concentrate on their studies. Many students, when psychologically affected by love affairs, often skip classes at school or even leave school. Hence, they often have poor academic results and are not able to get a diploma, which can directly affect their future career.
Conversely, from a different perspective, some people believe that can positively affect their mental health and studying. It is true that love can invigorate people and encourage them to study hard. According to the share of many university students, they said that it was their lover who helped them have a better orientation for their future life, thereby motivating them to try harder for study and work. However, it is a major rate of undergraduates having a suitable lover.
In conclusion, having a romantic relationship at university can waste students' time and pose a threat to their future careers. Therefore, those who are in a relationship should use love in a good way and can manage their time properly. They also have to concentrate on their studies, which could even turn to their advantage. It is predicted that the percentage of students falling in love while in school will decrease in the fast pace of modern life, where work and finance are the most important factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90190735695 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72342472325 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493188010899 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1239447852 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6842105263 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.530585586914 0.244688304435 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191605334197 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156079507654 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355360132679 0.151304729494 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.275449007065 0.056905535591 484% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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