Many students often say that there are three things they must do at least once in college: fail the exam, get a scholarship, and have a lover. Many people believe that falling in love in college is not a good idea , but I disagree. During their four years of college, students should experience at least one romance, in my opinion.
First, having a love interest while studying will help students improve their academic performance. When both are in a relationship and have goals towards the future, each person becomes the driving force of the other's efforts. Two people will help each other at work, and learning from there will achieve better results.
On the other hand, the love of the lecture hall also helps the learners to preserve their beautiful YOUthful time. Unlike feelings when YOU are a teenager or nearly 30 years old, YOUR twenties are when people are at their most beautiful and full of life. If that time has an extra half to accompany, overcome difficulties together, it is definitely the most beautiful time in life.
Some people think that it is not advisable to fall in love while in college because it takes up a lot of YOUR study and work time, leaving students with not enough time to study as well as participate in other activities. However, I find that this is not entirely true, because every learner is capable of knowing what is good and bad and how to organize their time properly. They don't always think only about love, but life has many other interesting things to enjoy. Love is one of them.
In conclusion, falling in love on campus is a very interesting experience because it not only helps people to change themselves but also to save good memories. Students, try it once to be able to feel it in the most authentic way and surely will not regret it
Many students often say that there are three things they must do at least once in college: fail the exam, get a scholarship, and have a lover. Many people believe that falling in love in college is not a good idea , but I disagree. During their four years of college, students should experience at least one romance, in my opinion.
First, having a love interest while studying will help students improve their academic performance. When both are in a relationship and have goals towards the future, each person becomes the driving force of the other's efforts. Two people will help each other at work, and learning from there will achieve better results.
On the other hand, the love of the lecture hall also helps the learners to preserve their beautiful YOUthful time. Unlike feelings when YOU are a teenager or nearly 30 years old, YOUR twenties are when people are at their most beautiful and full of life. If that time has an extra half to accompany, overcome difficulties together, it is definitely the most beautiful time in life.
Some people think that it is not advisable to fall in love while in college because it takes up a lot of YOUR study and work time, leaving students with not enough time to study as well as participate in other activities. However, I find that this is not entirely true, because every learner is capable of knowing what is good and bad and how to organize their time properly. They don't always think only about love, but life has many other interesting things to enjoy. Love is one of them.
In conclusion, falling in love on campus is a very interesting experience because it not only helps people to change themselves but also to save good memories. Students, try it once to be able to feel it in the most authentic way and surely will not regret it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng in love in college is not a good idea , but I disagree. During their four years...
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Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...w to organize their time properly. They dont always think only about love, but life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64465408805 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43578307327 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.880402154 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388695873797 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128059999452 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155699397381 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223862367795 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.254084581775 0.056905535591 447% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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