Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people commonly believe that it is beneficial to earn more money and have less spare time than live on a moderate income and spend more free time. From my perspective, I approve of the second statement because the value for money is of great importance but adoring myself leads to an enjoyable life.
It is undeniable that money plays an essential role in the social community so that some people usually devote their life to get higher on the occupation ladder by trying to earn money as much as possible. It provides them with cosy life and adequate amenities. They could also use the money to purchase high-brand things for their beloved. However, occasionally, overwhelming work could cause them to be exhausted, isolated and deter them from resting and spending time with their family.
On the other hand, putting aside financial pressure to spend more free time could make people have a healthy and delightful life. There have been more and more people diagnosed with depression because of social pressure and standards. Therefore, free time could help them know themselves better to pursue their passion or hobby. Furthermore, gathering to their own family is a method of relaxation and healing in this increasingly rapid life pace, which makes them comfortable and gain optimism and enthusiasm when facing obstacles.
Nowadays, while many people try to acquire promotions, well-paid jobs, it is much better to spend more free time having an enjoyable lifestyle, exploring many other wonderful things. In my opinion, earning money for living is essential but sparing more free time for myself and my family is much more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59666347063 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5527776931 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378452814693 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141818334508 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134821896231 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253051035435 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108108139384 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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