Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a perspective that medical treatments should be provided by the health ministry no matter how the resident income is. However, some state that each person is responsible for taking care of their health. I am convinced that patients deserve the free healthcare costs.
First and foremost, a free provision makes way to improve general health. As a controversial issue, there are still a few vulnerable stakeholders lacking access to medical remedies in several developing countries, namely South Africa, Brazil and Vietnam. This is because the advent of cutting-edge medical services is more prevalent meanwhile the majority of citizens is poor and uneducated, resulting in the inability to be proficient in this sector and pay for the cost. For example, the government in Vietnam has supported subsistence fees for people in poverty whenever they have health problems.
Moreover, this subsidy opens the door to a potential economy because of its positive implications. In addition, humans bear resemblance to an important resource which are contribute in various crucial fields such as environment, agriculture and education. Unless people have a good health condition, they will not enable to use their mental and physical strength to make huge productivities. The assistance of governments, therefore, creating more opportunities for the development of a country.
To sum up, people’s opinion differs to whether the precaution of health belongs to the government or themselves. With these aforementioned ideas, I strongly state that people should be provided with free medical costs irrespective of their financial status.
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- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 11
- The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...ance to an important resource which are contribute in various crucial fields such as envir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6015936255 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11417726377 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6921657676 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225134442178 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712578729335 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532236458612 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137851734672 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741760313025 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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