Homework
The pie chart below demonstrates the favorite type of takeaways feed in the UK sort by the rate of popularity in ten categorize, while the bar graph shows the statistic of Indian restaurants which had been Established in the UK between 1960 and 2015. Overall, Chinese and Indian the meals are the most popular takeaway in the UK, and the number of Indian restaurant rose steadily during these years.
The pie chart shows that Chinese food is the most favorite takeaway with 34%. Indian food is in the second place with 26%. After these two popular takeaways, Italian food accounts for 10% of favorite takeaways in the UK. British food, with 9%, is three times more popular than Thai food. Greek, Japanese and Mexican foods are the least favorite takeaways with 1%.
Having said that, Indian food is the second most popular take away in the UK. The bar chart shows the number of Indian restaurant increased during this period, from 500 restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 1990,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of Indian restaurant is in 2009.Since 2011, the number has not changed much. Overall, by far, Indian dishes are extremely popular in the UK therefore, the growth of Indian restaurants in the given years are not surprising although Chinese food is far the favorite one as well.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The pie chart below demonstrates the favorite type of...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lished in the UK between 1960 and 2015. Overall, Chinese and Indian the meals ar...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
... increased during this period, from 500 restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant ...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
... restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 19...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 1990,about 300...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
...reatest increase was in 1990,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of I...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...0,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of Indian restaurant is ...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... number of Indian restaurant is in 2009.Since 2011, the number has not changed much. ...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2011, the number has not changed much. Overall, by far, Indian dishes are extre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, therefore, well, while, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89224137931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44799886121 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0296591563 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The pie chart below demonstrates the favorite type of...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lished in the UK between 1960 and 2015. Overall, Chinese and Indian the meals ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
... increased during this period, from 500 restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
... restaurant in 1960 to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 19...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... to almost over 9000 restaurant in 2015.The greatest increase was in 1990,about 300...
^^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'restaurant' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'restaurants'.
Suggestion: restaurants
...reatest increase was in 1990,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of I...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...0,about 3000 restaurant during 7 years. The highest number of Indian restaurant is ...
^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... number of Indian restaurant is in 2009.Since 2011, the number has not changed much. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2011, the number has not changed much. Overall, by far, Indian dishes are extre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, therefore, well, while, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89224137931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44799886121 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0296591563 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.