Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals species. Some people think that is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
With the enhancement and expansion of human’s kingdom, a increasingly growing number of other creatures living in this world are under huge pressure to survive because of human activities. When it comes whether people have time and energy to correct our wrong behaviors and address this issue, different people holds different views. From my perspective, although some of our mistakes is irreversible, it is still critical for us to mitigate these problems.
Groups of people are strongly convinced that a vast majority of pollution we made and nonrenewable resources we consumed are tricky problems which is almost impossible to be solved. Firstly, we do damage the environment by putting tons of harmful rubbish in the nature, such as exhausted, plastics and batteries, which rob of their habitat cruelly. For example, we product and consume a large amount of plastic bags which is hard for the earth to break down. Thus, people has no choice but transform the forests into landfill used to dig plastics into the land. What’s more, utilizing plenty of unrecoverable energy is also our fault. For instance, it is not an uncommon phenomenon for citizens to use transport system as much as possible. Overly exploiting the oil and natural gas to support our well-organized transport system leads to frequent earthquake, and therefore some animals and plants suffer from fierce disasters.
However, opponents argue that it is not too late for person to take a variety of feasible and effective measures. One of the most utmost methods is that we could reduce the usage of environmental hazardous materials as much as us can. If we could introduce laws to increase tax aimed to those product, consume and throw plastic goods, we would lay emphasis on using more eco-friendly alternatives. Also, provided that we could discover new energy, this issue could be largely improved.
In my opinion, admittedly, it is us that destroy our significant mother earth and make it life-threatening for plants and animals, but it is never too late to shoulder protecting responsibilities to rebuild a comfy and cozy environment and get along with our partners harmoniously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... and expansion of human's kingdom, a increasingly growing number of other cr...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'those products'?
Suggestion: this product; those products
...introduce laws to increase tax aimed to those product, consume and throw plastic goods, we wo...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., this issue could be largely improved. In my opinion, admittedly, it is us that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98551742345 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631428571429 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2551786002 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14958576914 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446972053439 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404585794617 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842956329086 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390437262006 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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