I believe that the best investment is an investment in education. During my master's degree study at the Central European University I saw how vital are theoretical knowledge, practical
I believe that the best investment is an investment in education. During my master's degree study at the Central European University I saw how vital are theoretical knowledge, practical experience, guidance, and support from teachers and peers. All of these is essential part to upgrade the professional level and self-confidence of each student, despite the area of origin, nationality, religion, and socio-economic status. I aspire to become a part of your community as it could open for me new goals and opportunities to grow further in this area of expertise. I have several competencies, which are well suited for the program. Firstly, I have a combination of a strong educational background in Economics at a bachelor's program in American University in Central Asia, Management from Master Degree in International University in Kyrgyzstan (Kyrgyzstan) and in Finance from the Master of Science program at the Central European University (Hungary). Secondly, I have more than five years of experience in the banking sector (Kyrgyzstan), focusing on introduction of the new approaches in banking supervision and procurement. Thirdly, I am a young professional who is eager to learn new approaches in order to expand my competencies and skills, particularly in the area of finance.
- The reading states that robustus was a scavenger However the lecturer claims that R robustus was a successful predator because of the three following reasons 81
- The author of the reading believes that the main reason why sea otters have disappeared is pollution However the lecturer states that the main reason for the reduction in the number of sea otters comes from hunting 73
- Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past Do you agree or disagree with the following statement 80
- The reading passage states that there is a decline in reading the literature However the lecturer says that there no real decline 70
- These days much of the foods people eat gets transported from farms that are thousannds of miles away Some people believe that it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consume food produced by local farmers Would the advantage 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 834, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Kyrgyzstan
...r Degree in International University in Kyrgyzstan Kyrgyzstan and in Finance from the Master of Scien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3975473706 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8355436088 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.625 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359909534408 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136948835771 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181386499392 0.0667982634062 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359909534408 0.151304729494 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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