IELTS-essay: the qualities that make someone admirable
Have you ever admired someone? For me, I have been admiring a number of people, such as my parents, my teacher, my friends, my colleagues, and even plenty of well-known actors. I found that their common qualities are humility and discipline, which lead them to be successful characters. From my perspective, humility and discipline are critical qualities for me to sharpen myself.
Firstly, humility is regarded as the first necessary factor to becoming a successful person in this life. The more modest they are, the more successful they become because they are clearly conscious of their status and their level of knowledge , which makes them never stop trying their best and putting a great deal of their heart into life and work instead of showing off their achievements. When they’re basically fulfilled with their goal, they will start to follow other role models so that they can sharpen and make them become the best version possible. It is humility that contributed to their perfect lives.
In addition, it is no doubt about discipline to help our dream come true. If we have all good qualities without discipline, the path leading to success will be a long way away. Discipline will kill our bad habits. For example, we intend to do some math exercises at 7 p.m., but we surf the internet until 10 p.m. and decide to go to bed. With this bad habit, you delay your main work and spend too much time doing useless things. Therefore, discipline will help us complete our mission as soon as possible. If we hope to achieve success earlier, discipline is an essential key to our aspiration.
In conclusion, nobody succeeds from the moment they are born. The road to glory that they are owning from attempting daily in the past. They always sharpen their skills better and better day by day to achieve success. The most important keys among their qualities are humility and discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88854489164 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56017913885 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2966314663 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1052631579 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913053198528 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313089489524 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532608398138 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547957521016 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472702012232 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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