IELTS-essay: the qualities that make someone admirable
Admirable people are virtually always successful, and their actions have an impact on our daily lives. They can serve as good role models for us to follow. Optimism and humility, in my opinion, are two crucial attributes that make a person liked.
To begin with, an optimist can motivate a person to be positive, thus a person worthy of admiration must be optimistic. Being an optimist necessitates a series of positive concepts that frequently see the best in things. Optimistic people endure unspeakable pain and try to retain a positive outlook in life. They have learned to see adversity and challenges as motivation to succeed. As a result, optimists deserve to be admired. They are aware of who they are, what they believe, and what they wish to accomplish. They always choose to try rather than give up.
Second, humility is an important quality that becomes an admirable person. Humble people recognize and accept their own abilities. With a thorough understanding of their respective strengths and weaknesses. They work hard to improve their skills. They don't brag about their abilities; instead, they work hard every day to improve. Not even when they are superior to everyone else. They're interesting because they don't pretend to be perfect. They accept their limitations and work hard to improve themselves.
It doesn't matter who you are to be an admirable person, but you must possess the necessary qualities. Optimism and humility propel us toward creating a beautiful world and filling everyone's hearts with love.
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Comments
In general, traits that…
In general, traits that define someone as admirable frequently include a combination badland of internal characteristics, moral principles, and deeds that encourage and inspire others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, thus, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7271200927 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7576360811 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0617703869228 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189694830366 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370416728572 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449152636646 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227513752299 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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