*IELTS Essay Topic of The day*
*As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To get employment in these recent time, people may require to get more than one professional qualifications despite that many students are gaining admission to universities. I my opinion i agree that people seeking for jobs shall be employed with one qualification rather that two or more while starting a new job.
To begin with, the period spent in reading a course in the university takes a while before students can graduate from school.If student are to spend almost all the youthful years schooling before working, definitely they will have no working experience. For instance, undergraduate who gained admission into college of medicine at mid twenties will surely finished school in his early thirties if he did not have any carry over course.If sure a person is to acquire another certificate before he start practising, to be gainfully employed will be a bit challenging unlike if he had been employed when he finished his first degree.
Secondly, some students are not financial buoyant enough to train themselves further after first degree. Most undergraduate are been sponsored by the parents,these parents belief that once they finished their program is expected that they should start working.However, if it's demands for they to obtain second certificate before being employed is going to be hard on the parents as they will not be able to afford sending their children to school for another professional program while they have not even practice with the first certificate they have received.
Finally, as many are going for undergraduate degrees, they should be allowed to work with the first degree they have obtained .As they have spent time reading the course and in addition most parents can not finance their children for second degree as a result of financial constraints.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...loyment in these recent time, people may require to get more than one professiona...
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Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... these recent time, people may require to get more than one professional qualificatio...
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...admission to universities. I my opinion i agree that people seeking for jobs shal...
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...lification rather that two or more while starting a new job. To begin with, th...
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...kes a while before students can graduate from school.If student are to spend almo...
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...fore students can graduate from school.If student are to spend almost all the you...
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...of medicine at mid twenties will surely finished school in his early thirties if he did ...
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...f he did not have any carry over course.If sure a person is to acquire another cer...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
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...o acquire another certificate before he start practising, to be gainfully employed wi...
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...aduate are been sponsored by the parents,these parents belief that once they finished ...
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...eir program is expected that they should start working.However, if its demands fo...
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Suggestion: However
...xpected that they should start working.However, if its demands for they to obtain seco...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to send'.
Suggestion: to send
...ents as they will not be able to afford sending their children to school for another pr...
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...with the first degree they have obtained .As they have spent time reading the cour...
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...th the first degree they have obtained .As they have spent time reading the course...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18150684932 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84125861478 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.501011793 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.142857143 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.7142857143 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5714285714 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124268069079 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861099594519 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10449994488 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980846121801 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112307235452 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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