Certain individuals believe…
Certain individuals believe that advertisement influence us on what we purchase, while others argue that advert is now seen every that people now ignore it. The purpose of this is to analyze both sides of the argument and then give my own perspective.
There are two major reasons why people bel I that advertising have effect on what people buy. One of the main reason is,it allows them to know what is trendy. As people do not have much time to surf the internet or watch television due to their busy schedule. They can easily see what they want to purchase through bill boards on the road while driving. As well as, knowing the current product that is one sales. For instance, someone that want to buy a particular phone could easily be influenced due to what he see on advert thus, changes his mind to buy the mask me been advertised . This is as a result of the success advert had on him in purchasing the product.
However,the reasons why people ignore this advert these days is that,it could be boring. Because,this advertisement is constantly be aired and people are already used to it. Such as, the advertisement of how to get cheaper data bundles. More so,the way this advert interrupt what someone is doing could be very annoying. When people are extremely busy and do have a dead line to meet up with,the advert will just pop up and take some time to run. This can be people annoyed and sometimes frustrated. As a result, people just pretend and skip this avoidable advert when working to save time.
In conclusion,as advert influence how costumers buy their products such as, allowing them to know what is invoke and can easily help to make appropriate choice. It is also ignored by people as the advert pop up at inappropriate time and this could be very frustrating.I completely agree that advertising greatly influence people in buying items as it all allows them to make choice out of the numerous choices available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75218658892 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6279777208 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4843598102 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198967220681 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657822202917 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531516562165 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106660343698 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565243803793 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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