If some people get a chance to choose between life without work or spending
most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. Do you agree
or disagree?
Getting a job is a part of life for every single person but if people had the opportunity to choose between staying at home or working, I think they would choose to stay at home. This essay will discuss the reasons why people would prefer to stay at home rather than go to work.
When a person gets a job they make a commitment to their employer to spend a certain number of hours working everyday. However, when they get back home from work they won’t be able to spend quality time with their family as they will be too tired. Some parents end up not being able to see their children during the week as they come back home only after their children have gone to bed. This can take a toll on their relationship and is one of the reasons why people would prefer to stay at home rather than work.
The second reason people would prefer to stay at home is the stress that working puts them through. Everyone has deadlines or targets to meet and this can cause their work life to be extremely stressful. This stress can take a toll on them causing erratic eating schedules, sleepless nights and various other things that could affect their physical and mental health. Most people would prefer to stay at home and take care of their health by exercising, meditating and eating right.
In conclusion, I agree that most people would choose not to work as it would make their lives more carefree, give them more time to spend with friends and family and lead to better mental and physical health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tay at home rather than go to work. When a person gets a job they make a commitm...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...spend a certain number of hours working everyday. However, when they get back home from ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49450549451 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12052797488 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509157509158 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.607604413 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30540355997 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133349209523 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724098122496 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209227584593 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500545579656 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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