Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Health, education, and trade is the first pondation to developing underprivileged. While, advances countries have important role for giving aid to that countries through distribution of it things. I agree with this notion, but pover countries also have own power to establish the region.
First of all, advances countries should be helping to provide facilities that can encourage the underdevelop countries such as health, education, and trade. In other words, relief that gived by advance countries will able to increasing level of society welfare because many positive impact from this action. Moreover, they can give aid such as financial support, resources for improvement, and particularly they have capable to supply technology as a result it is will being best methods in education system. For instance, Unilever is company derived from Belanda and was did expansion to 100 countries in world, one of that is in Indonesia, every years this company will look for best human resources and as a result they will gived occasion to develop their career with Unilever. Thus, projects from advance countries giving chance to working and mitigating amount of unemployment.
Secondly, advance countries just as intermediary for underprivileged countries. Some countries can't advanced when they lazy to made some transformation in the future. Furthermore, provision that gived by another countries must be cultivated by the great purpose and able to invent some upshot that can give impact to establishment the country because without endeavor from society and government all of it will be vain, while when advance countries decided to halt for supply all of item the countries feeling in big problem, however every countries can develop when people want to creat some cooperation. For example, when countries decided to separate their self from Cuba and stop to gived everything, the society of Cuba arouse bravery to conserved their plant by traditional agriculture and success and their economic became stable.
To conclude, combination of aid from advance countries and wish from underdeveloping countries will be generating a best result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: being the best
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Suggestion: done
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...developing countries will be generating a best result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44144144144 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93845646868 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5109251142 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.384615385 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9230769231 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858456355442 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420964367867 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361914159541 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568114467669 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358543088501 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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