In recent times, usage of mobile phones has revolutionised our living, communicating and business style. Although we feel more connected, it has resulted in serious health and social issues. Health complications may range from headaches to deterioration of eyesight; whereas, social troubles vary from becoming an introvert to a consummate liar. I strongly believe, mobile phones’ usage has more positives than negatives.
One of the major health issues that is resulted from the excessive use of mobile phones is consistent headaches and deterioration of eyesight. This may be caused because of the increase in screen timings. To illustrate this point, the recommended screen timing by the World Health Organization is 8 hours in a day and not only professionals but also students spend a lot more time on the laptops and mobile which in turn results regular headaches and weakened eyesight. In addition, mobiles phones affect human behaviour. For example, people become less social and a liar. By this I mean that when people feel in touch with the world through their phone then they socialise less. About being a liar, when people can be reached anytime then they make excuses which makes them to a consummate liar.
Despite having the negative impacts, according to me mobile phones can be termed as an invention of the century. They have made various complex tasks easier. For example, food, medicines, groceries or anything is just a click away. Moreover, with the mobile phones, people can call or leave a text and are not required to wait for days to get a reply for the emails. This results in smoother personal as well as professional relations. Businesses also take the advantage of various financial facilities provided over the phone via apps.
To conclude, usage of mobile phones is required to be kept in check otherwise it will lead to loss of eyesight and headaches. It will also alter the behaviour. If the usage is kept controlled than the benefits far exceeds the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for example, i mean, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81259792198 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3079516578 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219989781594 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671218039425 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528197315872 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130158087011 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237751393016 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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