An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
In contemporary life, there has been a growing trend towards jobs and accommodation transformation in human’s lifetime. Despite some adverse effects that do exist, there are still numerous advantageous impacts on citizens and their future.
On the one hand, relocation of offices and houses brings to dweller a variety of adverse effects. The biggest issue they have to suffer is cost and time of leaving to other places and settling in. There will be a loss of seniority allowance when employees quit works and new workplace could not be truly as satisfied as you might think. Meanwhile, citizens can meet the same problem when they have a change in their home if furniture is extravagant and neighbors are unfriendly as advertisement.
On the other hand, changes in career and living areas are also considerably beneficial for individuals. This transformation could be an improvement of working condition while getting higher earnings and have a good working relationship. At the same time, housing having a metamorphosis could accustom themselves to new residences which might contain new culture, new friends, new weathers or lifestyles. A good example of this trend is the movement from a teacher to start up a business of Jack Ma, the richest Chinese billionaire and he did live in the US for gaining knowledge of the internet.
In conclusion, although getting new jobs and living in new houses could make citizens meet some troubles, there is still numerous advantages to support this idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23360655738 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99773720987 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5304857186 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978260620179 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380029792893 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04128014944 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537415433736 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016665175833 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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