Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
In contemporary life, there has been a growing trend towards tourism expansion in a myriad of nations in the world. While it seems to be highly beneficial, this growth may bring a few adverse effects on particular sectors.
On the one hand, improving tourist business may be caused by a variety of reasons. Firstly, due to the significant amount of revenue from tourism, many investors has been attracted. Particularly, when one person who travels to another places, have to pay for hotels, transports, restaurants, generating considerably income for the local and creating a hundred of jobs. Secondly, these industries could promote tourism image and local culture, making regional inhabitants satisfied with their hometown. As a result, it is a stimulus to people living near tourist attractions to have obligation to contribute for their city.
On the other hand, it will be a remarkable negative one for human when widening the travel businesses. Firstly, tourism may noticeably cause the ruthless exploitation which is rapidly destroying our planet. In other words, development of tourism leads to damages for numerous natural areas such as forests or beaches, and some heritage sites because of overcrowding and badly behaving. Secondly, there will be less valuable for some places of interest when everyone can get there. For instance, Fansipan is the highest mountain in Vietnam and it took explorers three days to climb to the top, however, today people can pay for cable cars without any efforts, therefore, the adventure to this high top of Vietnam has no meaning.
In conclusion, broadening the industries of tourism has gained in popularity and it seems to be beneficial for society. However, it also comes at a great cost to nature and the local places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85341464875 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7625303461 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690439927619 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226855482979 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259003652507 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348365129371 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267174742809 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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