An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs.
Why do you think so many children are overweight?
What could be done to solve this problem?
When human enter in modern society, they defeat harsh environment and escape from cool and hunger, but another problem catch them, which is overweight. Parents find their kids become fatter and lazier and obviously may cause serious health problem in the future if without control. This essay will discuss the main reasons for it and give several measure to solve the issue.
The first reason for the increasing weight of children is the ignorance of healthy life habit and diet, and this phenomenon is remarkably common in developing countries. For example, in China, many kids spend the main time on studying and they always sitting in front of desk table or computer for too much time. Only few time is leave for exercise which lead to obesity in young age. Moreover, lots of children cannot control themselves stay away from junk food. When these various delicious food bring them enjoyment, on the same time they also contain excessive fat and sugar, which cause overweight. Finally, some kids are struggle in obesity not because of unhealthy diet but because of gene problem. They cannot stop from becoming fat even just eat little food.
There are several measures should be done to control the situation. Firstly, schools should leave enough time for children to doing sports. In order to help kids keep fitness, many schools have made the rule to push student doing exercise. Secondly, parents need to forbidden their kids to eat junk food. And cook delicious family food as alternative.
Overall, the obesity could be solved by healthy diet and regular exercise. And schools and parents should help kids to gain healthy life habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several measures
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Suggestion: few times
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Message: Did you mean 'forbid'?
Suggestion: forbid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05109489051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26198479301 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8347804219 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204139355175 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056503042181 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367919033359 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116487738555 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037690168022 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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