An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?
Obesity has become an alarming issue for most people these days, especially the children; this may result in hazardous health issues in near future. Few people think that an individual's food habit plays a vital role in defining his health, however in my opinion this is not the only factor contributing, and also there are several ways to tackle this issue.
We cannot deny the fact that these days most children have excess body weight. There are several reasons for this condition, food habits - indulging the intake of outside food will result in weight gain since it is not healthy; heredity - sometimes genes are responsible for causing weight gain; deficiency of certain nutrients - the child might look healthy from outside but could be lacking essential nutrients which could be liable for his weight. Majority of parents are working and hence have limited time; due to which the child is deprived of attention, as a result there is no one monitor his eating habits. Apart from these factors, the importance of physical activity in one's routine has been misunderstood and less looked at. The parent never emphasizes their child for regular exercise or any sport activity. For example, in metro cities such as Mumbai, the parents hardly have time to spend with their children, as a result they do not know about their child's day to day routine and food habits and most of them are obese.
Furthermore, in order to deal with the issue of overweight, the government must organize health and awareness campaigns in schools and colleges, where parents and students can participate and gain the insights of healthy lifestyle and proper nutrition. Additionally, some new protocols must be implemented on the sale of junk food such that people restrict themselves in eating it. To illustrate, the tax rate could be increased in fast and junk foods, such that people feel its expensive and will think before purchasing it. Apart from this, the schools can focus more on the physical training in their curriculum and should organize regular sports or exercise sessions, this would help a student indulge in physical activity. To exemplify, a prominent school in Ahmedabad, Gujarat, has a daily morning exercise session reserved for physical exercise which is mandatory for all the students.
To conclude, notwithstanding, the growing the number of overweight children in current times, with the help of government and school authorities we can tackle this issue efficiently. In my viewpoint, certain proactive efforts from educational institutions and government would help the world cope up with this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16784869976 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217410514 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557919621749 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6957801664 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.733333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186923242578 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586992010225 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406463006096 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112552070967 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186241862999 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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