An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online?
It is true that there is a significant growth in the number of customers purchasing their needed things via shopping online. This tendency could bring particular merits in parallel with some demerits for both individuals and companies.
On the one hand, certain benefits can be offered by online shopping. Accordingly, digital commerce platforms such as Shoppee, Lazada, and Tiki are becoming more and more available, especially the youngster due to their convenience, time-saving, and labor-saving features. The users are able to buy kinds of stuff at a click of a button and compare the prices among a variety of shops with ease to get the best deal. Also, they do not have to commute from their houses to the shops by themselves under the severe weather, which is suitable for someone who has a hectic schedule. Otherwise, the companies which manage some e-commerce platforms can also take advantage of online shoppers’ demands. One of the biggest advantages of e-commerce to businesses that keep sellers interested in online selling is cost reduction. Many sellers have to spend a large amount of money to maintain their physical stores for decorations, advertisements, and rent. In contrast, an e-commerce store is affordable and requires less investment when compared with a physical store.
On the other hand, some drawbacks of this kind of shopping can be anticipated. Firstly, online shoppers can not be ensured about the real quality of the items and expose to fake products or low-quality goods. Because of believing in scammers in the virtual world, people can waste a big sum of money purchasing unworthy things. In addition, businesses have to face up to the fierce competition in the internet world. There is a wide range of companies engaged in online shopping competition, so big corporations always come up with more effective advertising promotions, marketing, and even more affordable products that could steal their business. If the committees do not give a wise strategy, the whole company will experience considerable losses.
In conclusion, although online shopping makes people more vulnerable to low-quality assurance, scammers, and leads businesses to a competitive environment, it’s a useful way that makes people's life easier and contributes to companies’ cost reduction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35164835165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01572780221 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5878515092 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.588235294 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2325229358 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633805933806 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410664103445 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134415539283 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193162984501 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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