An increasing number of people are buying online whatever they need.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online?
A lot of individuals and companies prefer to shop anything they need with the help of internet. We need to consider both the benefits and drawbacks of online shopping. I will mention the arguments for and against this type of shopping in the upcoming paragraphs.
First, let us consider the pros of buying a product online. Undoubtedly, online shopping is a time saving process as it allows us to buy any product like clothes, home decor and other accessories by sitting at home or anywhere else. If a person wants to visit a shop physically then he or she has to burn some fuel or spend money in order to reach there. It is also tough to find a particular product at the shops. Thus, online shopping saves our valuable time. In addition, it also offer heavy discounts to public occasionally. Moreover, cheap deals are available for large groups of people like companies. Consequently, it helps in conserving money.
On the contrary, it often leads to various scams. When we shop online, we need to fill all the credit card details and other personal information. This can cause credit card scams, hacking et cetera. Furthermore, when we buy products online, sometimes the delivery can be delayed or delivered to wrong address. Also, the quality of ordered product is not up to the mark and returning process can be hectic. For instance, few years ago, I got a pair of shoes but the leather involved in making the shoes was not good. So, I returned them and got a new pair after waiting for approximately 2 months.
To summarise, there are equal number of merits and demerits of buying something online on various websites. So, it solely depends upon the choice of on an individual whether to buy a product online or physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...home or anywhere else. If a person wants to visit a shop physically then he or sh...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to reach there. It is also tough to find a particular product at the shops. Thus,...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
...our valuable time. In addition, it also offer heavy discounts to public occasionally....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75496688742 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69135846307 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8097387201 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274406184571 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698149615708 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071748484135 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182416147859 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911511656726 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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