An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
In the fast-paced society, brain-drain from underdeveloped or developing nations has become a global burning issue. This phenomenon even widely emerges amongst skilled manpower including doctors and teachers, which entails some catastrophic consequences on the long-term general development of the whole country. Albeit there exist some undesirable outcomes of this migration, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential risks.
There are several socio-economic issues associated with the explosion of specialists leaving their poorer countries. In terms of the social implication, such professionals are likely to fall victims to an intense competition taking place in the labor market in many economically-advanced regions. In fact, the nearly-epidemic proportions of brain-drain could be interpreted as the unemployment rate standing a good chance of witnessing a marked escalation. What is more, economic instability is another chronic headache which deserves more consideration. As the shortage of high-skilled workforce becomes more outstanding, the more severe stagnancies are witnessed in the well-rounded economic growth as well as the mandatory improvements in the living standards of residents from these developing nations.
It is high time that earnest and urgent endeavors to halt the migration of such professionals were jointly made by both the economically-advanced regions and poorer ones. On a larger scale, the authorities from the developing countries should call for international assistance concerning financial aspects with the aim of supplying such specialists with more incentives as well as enhancing their working conditions by investing more money in implement the extension of state-of-the-art infrastructures. This will stimulate the skilled manpower to devote proficiency and talent to the general development of their native countries. When it comes to the measure for developed regions, the government are supposed to enforce more migration policies to minimize the mounting rate of brain-drain. Such policies should be better stipulated with higher job requirements for these high-skilled manpower.
Taking these aspects into consideration, migration of professionals such as doctors and teachers is an inevitable trend in the contemporary world. There is no single solution to the problems accruing from brain-drain; therefore, it is required that the countries involved have to commit all their heart and soul to tackling the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esidents from these developing nations. It is high time that earnest and urgent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9943977591 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50650384401 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.964952727 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211530706314 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655782831154 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433727201883 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119378555496 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201439402257 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.76 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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