An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation?

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation?

Many developing and underdeveloped countries are facing the economic crisis in the last decades.it comes in the main factor that experienced professionals immigrate from their home countries to richer nations for having the work and life satisfaction. this essay will examine certain causes and some solutions to tackle this problem.

there are some major reasons to explain the brain drain. Firstly, there is a huge gap between the salary of poor and rich nations. Unfortunately, it is clearly seen that the high potential employees, who are well-educated and talented graduates, have not been adequately paid as much as their workload or responsibilities in their home countries. Secondly, the instability in political, economic, education and health sectors, which have frequently changed governments or authorities, cannot provide for citizens such as intellectuals and skilled personnel with sustainable and assured workstations, job opportunities, as well as social services. For instance, in 2013, 15 million civil servants unemployed due to the financial crisis in Greece, whereat, its migration rate has increased by 18% during the period. Consequently, massively experienced workers have immigrated to the developed countries for getting better earnings and unrivaled opportunities to foster themselves professionally and support their families financially.

Turning to possible solutions to deal with migrating professionals from the country of origin is for the government should encourage and offer them to stay by advertising job opportunities on merits, as well as offer or maintain promotion and remuneration system, having specific allowance and salary for the high intellectuals as scientists, engineers, doctors, and teachers to prove their life expectancy. Furthermore, the stable government can affect the economic growth which can support the economic needs for upgrading the standards of living.

In conclusion, even though, the mass of highly educated workforce tends to find better chances overseas, this can still be solved by increasing their salary and improving the efficient government financial regulations for them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9076433121 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23597126075 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.813058317 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.636363636 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156755727801 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567272766273 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427752790695 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101757030396 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379959719491 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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