An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause and what solutions can you suggest dealing with this situation ?

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause and what solutions can you suggest dealing with this situation ?

An upswing in migration of experts such as doctors and teachers for better working opportunities has led to lack of skill manpower and economical unstability in home country. To rectify this, better job opportunities and education in home countries is the solution.

Economical unstability and lack of skill manpower has been caused due to the migration of experts. Lack in sense that there is shortage of competent professionals in home country that is why experts think developed countries will secure their future. Teachers make the students pillar of nation, those when migrated will economically weaken one's country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
An upswing in migration of experts such ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... secure their future. Teachers make the students pillar of nation, those when migrated w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... when migrated will economically weaken ones country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 528.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95903228056 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 176.041082164 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.16262957 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113074931274 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614046204216 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395479874826 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931851007229 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258471416716 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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