with an increasing population communicating via the internet, text messaging, and face-to-face communication will become a thing of the past. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
it is believed by some that with excessive usage of the internet, people might cease to contact through text messages or face-to-face communication with each other. This essay disagrees with the statement because the internet helps people to communicate more than usual.
there are many reasons behind the people who believe the internet diminishes the direct communication. firstly, most people are engaged in this innovative technology in terms of jobs, business, and entertainment purposes. such an attitude will lead to minimal interactions and face-to-face communication with anyone. secondly, many youngsters are not interested in communicating with nearby ones and social media sites would open up an advanced world, and connection with other people even not seen ones. These kinds of relations are not demanding commitment and they may not need direct communications. for instance, many websites are offering friendships or relaxing relations to anyone without personal data or sincere commitments.
on the other hand, the internet offers many spaces to be close to anyone, especially with family and friends, therefore direct contact and communication would not be obsolete. majority of young generations are studying and working overseas or in other cities and they are communicating with their dear ones through text messaging or video chat. similarly, the internet offers people with the same interests could join in a group and discuss their views with each other through face-to-face communication from anywhere. for instance, homemaker women's created a group through the internet and united together to mitigate their frustrations.
to sum up, it minimises face-to-face communication to some extent, overwhelming majority of people are still contacting each other face-ti-face, and it is not a thing of past in my perception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63082437276 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09329171639 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2562890441 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351363166152 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129466128639 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115074745807 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247392597987 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589762417274 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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