An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. some people say this is negative development . Discuss and give your opinion.
Nowadays there is an increasing trend among youngsters who play computer games. Some people believe that this will have a negative impact on young people. I completely disagree with the notion and I believe that playing games improves them personally, professionally, and academically.
Firstly, young people who are involved in playing games, will improve their skills and it also makes them to enhance their creative skills, which in turn future makes them a young gaming software developer or an entrepreneur. Besides, it reduces their stress levels and gives refreshment to mind.
Secondly, it makes them grow academically, for instance, in schools or colleges the E- learning classes are becoming a more easy way of learning the concepts for students, so the students who are proficient with the electronic brain skills will be more advantageous, because they can understand the E-learning classes quickly and also search the information online speedy and become a quick learner compared to adults who have less access to Artificial intelligence.
Thirdly, professionally now a days every company will be given first preference to adults who have good computer skills for providing a job, rather than compared to who are less efficient in it.
On the other hand, young people who spend more on playing the computer games will waste their precious time and spoil their career. However, if the time spent on playing the games is less than they can overcome the negativities and as a result, they can concentrate on their work as well as playing games.
To sum up, I believe The negative impacts are less compared to the pros of playing the games. It helps them to come up in life personally, Professionally, and academically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86849405366 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.576176951 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258748566904 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108070627947 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792016643841 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132846694076 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982340909617 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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