Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?
Early detection and preventive measures are often more successful than being treated. While carrying out studies in laboratories and curing various symptoms can undoubtedly be way more misleading, it is always considered to empower safety measures first at hand than going through a variety of procedures like surgery to be remedied.
In my point of view, I believe that health is the greatest asset of a nation, so the state needs to look after the health-related sectors. Additionally, effective health and safety regulations at work could save lives and income within the nation rather than carrying out different experiments and developing vaccines. For example, a vaccine that prevents measles and a medication that acts against heart attack, the value is obvious. Prevention care services should be funded more to educate people that early detection is better than going through the consequences.
As far as I am concerned, the promotion of a healthy lifestyle and prevention of ill health should be fundamental principles. Furthermore, prevention is about taking the upstream causes and effects into consideration before the outcomes. For instance, UK has had a rich history in eradicating the period of smallpox to the medication that acted against the cholera epidemic. With interruption being the first mode of help, people could adopt a healthy lifestyle without going through heavy loads of medicinal pills and surgeries.
In conclusion, health is a detrimental factor to be considered in today's world. With advancements nowadays, these issues could be addressed without future delay, as every problem even a hereditary disease could be solved with necessary action taken beforehand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered empowering'.
Suggestion: considered empowering
...ly be way more misleading, it is always considered to empower safety measures first at hand than goin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48288973384 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99093359339 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.051973723 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196337120973 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071453683956 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585832165688 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113030567478 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040071657902 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.