Increasingly, people eat food from other parts of the world, rather than local food. What do you think is driving this trend? Is this a good or bad development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
With the booming development of transportation, food travels thousands of miles from different continents to the consumers, which makes local food less popular. In this essay, I will shed light on the factorS that lead to this phenomenon and its positive effects on humans’ life.
With regards to the underlying causes, firstly, it is the curiosity of foreign cuisine that incentivizes people to purchase food from another other countries. In fact, fast food such as pizza, hamburger or fried chicken are becoming more and more ubiquitous amongst youngsterS in Asea on account of its signature western flavour. Secondly, since the advent of food preserving technology using liquid nitrogen and antioxidantS, the storage of fresh products is prolonged, thereby gaining the trust of more customers. Furthermore, as there are more and more means of transport, long-distance shipping is facilitated. Hence, the price of food is reduced considerably, which makes it more effortless for people with A low budget to buy imported food.
In addItion, the increasing consumption of foreign food benefits humans in several ways. Initially, as the price is reduced, people can seize the opportunity to enjoy exotic cuisine, which used to be a privilege for royal family only. Moreover, it is an ideal way for dwellers in different regions of the world to exchange their cultural identities through the meaning of the dish. To illustrate, several crownded crowded Vietnamese restaurants in the USA offer chances for the American to get deeper insight in the Viet cuisine, which not only reinforce their relationship but also promote the development of tourism in both countries.
In a nutshell, it is the curiosity and the facilitation of shipping and preservation that encourage people to consume imported food, and this development brings a multitude of merits in the development of tourism and cultural understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04348301932 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1342884254 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205482620301 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730243284335 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487380170852 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127783311784 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346426715889 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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