The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
With the booming development of tourism, the use of English are is spreading and predominantly becoming of supreme importance in every countries country across the globe. The merits and shortcomings of learning one language solely will be shed light on in this essay.
It is undeniable that making English become the predominant language in the world brings humans a multitude of benefits. As the language barrier is eliminated, communication have has never been so effortless to people from different nations. In addition, the likelihood of culture shock is also , minimized which substantially reinforces the relationships between people all over the globe. In fact, the assimilation in language in English speaking countries such as Singapore, Australia, the New Zealand, etc paves the way for culture integration, thereby enhancing their bilateral and lateral relationship. Furthermore, the similarity in language creates invalid opportunities for scientists and researchers from different countries to get access to state-of-the-art researching methodologies and thus enhance the development of science and technology, which enhance the quality of human’s life.
Nevertheless, forcing people from all over the globe to use English solely can culminate in several unanticipated drawbacks. Since language is a distinctive portrayal of a country’s culture identity, the fact that applying one international language eliminates the great diversity of cultures that takes each civilisation millions years to develop. To illustrate, Vietnamese words such as Tet, Banh Chung or Banh Day represent the signature dishes in their traditional holiday that neither exists in the UK’s culture nor anywhere else in the world. Accordingly, if there was no culture cultural diversity, tourism would be the first industry to be affected severely, thereby jeopardize jeopardizing the entire economy.
In a nutshell, although the use of english as single language in the world brings many advantages in terms of the integration, its drawbacks can pose a threat to the culture cultural diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75483870968 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27456561313 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.27731433 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260081447689 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989422498377 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598211249414 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166695601135 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466250712958 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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