individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people said that it is almost impossible for one person to change the world by him or herself. They remain the idea that only organizations such as governments or big organizations could giving out new products or policies that make the difference. Personally, I believe this is not necessarily true because it is the individuals that start the movements of change.
A great effort is needed for society to be changed that is why governments are established to govern, support and call out for change. Take the UK as an example, during the Brexit process it had required way more the just a few people to actually carry out the withdrawal from the EU. Thanks to the UK’s government that the British are now could benefit more from the separation like more job offers for the inhabitant resulting in an increase in their national GDP. Furthermore, in the context of covid-19 governments and world organizations are what we need to overcome the plague. Due to the advancements of health firms such as Pfizer and the support of authorities that we are now able to be vaccinated, not to mention for free.
However, it is the individuals and their ideas that changing the world. It all starts with a seemed to be the craziest idea that form our society today. A century ago nobody would think that people could travel from one place to another by flying except the Wright brothers. As the result, we are now able to fly from one continent to another in just a day.
In conclusion, It is true that to reform society governments and big firms are needed because the effort for it is enormous. However, innovations from individuals are what it really takes for firms to release any cutting-edge products. If personal opinions are weighted and considered by the majority then it would bring about beneficial change for the society.
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- some people believe that competitive sports both team and individual have no place in the school curriculum To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... governments or big organizations could giving out new products or policies that make ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81388012618 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76141480705 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4237998906 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132259366875 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477107128961 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354391424821 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830487123709 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192933477523 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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