individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only government and large companies can make a difference to what extent do you agree or disagree
Rule can make anything possible. Environment protection has become one of the most important issue the public are concern about it. But some people are thinking that it is the responsibilities of government and big companies to protect the environment. I completely agree with this .government or companies can do more efficient work than normal people.
An order by superior authorities can change anything in system of society. Government is taking good initiative steps to ward environment protection that can education people and get concern about environment safety and protection .slogan like Save tree and save water are grasping attention of crowed in cross road which has arranged by government. these are the steps which are leading people towards thinking about environmental safety. many corporate companies are willing to participate along with government and as responsible some companies are doing good things about environment and trying to bring some change in people thinking some software companies like INFOSYS are modified their office premises with plants which indicates their concern about environment collaboration of government and large companies can able to spent a lot of money on environment and government rule was must followed by people.
normal people can not bring the drastic change than comparatively with government or companies. a crowed puller must lead people towards that change it can turnaround the situation and can change mindset easily .
I conclude that government or companies can do effectively work about environment protection than normal people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56967213115 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96694783072 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520491803279 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.929522848 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 7.06120827912 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284642263755 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126395086317 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820041641451 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214713291922 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514924364801 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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