Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Jailbirds, after their release from imprisonment, a lot of them violate society's laws still and keep committing felonies. The first step to the answer here is what is the cause of their actions. Accordingly, this essay will discuss some of the possible causes of this foul act and its impact on the community.
Not only risking their life spent in jail again, but also forsaken by society, these former prisoners return to the crime-life for reason. One of these reasons might be the lack of opportunities introduced by their
government to live a decent life with decent wages to keep them surviving alongside their families without the need for perpetration. Those humans might not want to commit any sins if given a choice, but due to the lack of options to earn their living from ways other than criminality, they are forced to commit offences once again. Another cause of recidivism would be the lack of probation period, whether its inside the confinement or after the release. It is a very important protective measure to rehabilitate the criminals and reduce the chances of any further crimes committed by them.
There is no doubt that crimes have a negative impact on society. To eradicate the problem is to eliminate its causes, which will lead us in this case to reduce the crime levels committed by former convicts. If they come out of prison and do not find an honest way to earn their keep, they will keep committing crimes as the only option they see valid. Furthermore, in case of creating opportunities, these former prisoners need further guidance by the law-hands to guide them to these opportunities. Without the guidance, the consequences will be catastrophic on the hole society.
Commiting sins is not necessary ending after imprisonment period done by former convict, in fact it can be continued once out of prison as lot of them does. No job to earn decent money and the lack of probation will lead to further crimes and even lesser vacancies for jobs. So, to let the former criminals help in their society, society will have to help them first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s. Accordingly, this essay will discuss some of the possible causes of this foul act and it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8676056338 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67793262614 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1830639435 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276267037875 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879962674938 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504792518101 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14968082003 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781706522413 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.