Inorder to study at university students are to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that University education should be free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Entrance into higher institution is not accessible because the fees are expensive and to most people, it is unaffordable so many believe that University education ought to be free for all irrespective of their background. In my opinion, I completely agree that higher education should be made free for all people as it will immensely benefit the individual as well as the society at large.
Improved academic performance is one of the reasons why University fees should be eradicated. This means that the students will exclusively focus on their studies thereby achieving good grades rather than being distracted by worries of how to raise money for school fees. For example, students under full scholarship program perform better academically compared to those who don’t have such privilege. This is possible because the former has little to worry about. Hence, poor academic grades can improve when tuition free program is instituted for the benefit of everyone.
Lastly, free University education creates opportunity for both the rich and the poor to have equal right and access to education. Presently, the poor are denied admission into the University because they are not able to pay the stipulated amount. This becomes a challenge to the individual of which can be avoided by granting free education to all.
In conclusion, having known that University education is very expensive, if free education is introduced , academic performance and equality amongst people of diverse backgrounds will be achieved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39330543933 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.880655669 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2099055604 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332791045133 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118108001493 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530439243886 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195245040417 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398552201768 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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